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This didn't take as long as I thought it would.
Then again I did work on it for....
4-5 hours non-stop, all in a row. Only a potty break or two.
Though it didn't come out as good as I wanted it to, I think it is still kinda nice.


Her name is Roxanne, and I made her while in the middle of trying to draw myself.
That is correct! This started as a drawing of myself!
Funny, huh?
Anyways, it was starting to look really pretty, so I just started to add things and edit it, until it didn't look like me at all. So I started to make it into a character. In the midst of the sketch I had already come up with her name.
She struck me as a Roxanne. Next I'll come up with a story for her.


Yes, I know the background/grass is really shitty. But I didn't really try on that. But besides that, tell me what you think! Critiques please!


While she was still a work in progress: [link]

Critiques


:iconchibibreeder:
Lovely choice of colors, the contrast between the greens and the magnificent reds is really pleasing to the eye. Your shading is definitely improving; Particularly on the hair. I noticed some strands going on in there, which is really nice. The character herself is really good, And that's cool that you made her up while drawing yourself! I really like her belt and whatnot, she seems like a spunky character. Something to work on for your next pictures might be the line art. Your drawing skills are really good, but it could be a bit smoother and thinner. The hard, black lines are kind of distracting from your soft shading and your coloring technique. Overall very nice picture, and a great new character. Draw more of her, please!
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:icondeidaraxsenpai:
Whoa, this is awesome! :0

you draw bewbs well...


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:iconcoldex:
Thank you! <3

hehehehe.
I'm not a pervert.


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:icondeidaraxsenpai:
Well I didn't mean it like that. :iconteheplz:

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:iconmaytay18:
WOW,you HAVE improved!

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:iconcoldex:
>w< Thank you very much!

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